Story about telling a lie: The final draft

     In writing class, we did a second writing, which we had to tell a brief story that had to do with "telling a lie". We did a first version of what we wrote and then, make a final one and post it in our class blog. Here's my draft writting:


                                       Here's the plan

                                                               By: Lola Fernández Cosentino

        Matt Tromberry is a very friendly person. He is currently 20 years old, and he has a lot of intresting and amazing stories in high school, and this one I will tell is one of them. This is the story of how his best friend Tom, met him.

       All of this started when he was just 13 years old (this happened 7 years ago). His classmates and him were just starting high school, which was a big challenge for all of them. This group wasn't organized at all, they were always yelling, talk in class and they always bothered eachother. Anyways, one of the "popular" boys was Matt Tromberry. He always had a smirk on his face, and almost everyone liked him. His best friend was Peter Griffin. They were always together. They invited eachother to their houses, to watch football matches, or just to go for a walk at the park, talking about stuff. But one day, all of this changed.

      Matt and Peter had an argument, since both of them were supposed to do a presentation and both of them forgot, so Matt blamed Peter for it. After this, Matt got mad at him and never talked to him ever again. Peter wanted revenge, since he thought Matt has unfair. He decided to spread a lie about him. He arrived to school much more early than Matt, so he decided to start the plan. First, he told Viv, since this girl is mostly known for not keeping secrets. The lie was that !att had a huge crush on Sarah (which, of course wasn't true). As it was expected, she was impressed, and she started spreading the lie. In less than 45 minutes, all the school knew about it. Matt finally arrived. When he got to the playground, everyone stared at him. He was very confused and also pretty scared. He saw Hazel, who was staring at him as well. He asked her why they were staring at him. And then, she had no choise. She told him the lie. He was in shock and also, very mad. He wanted revenge, both to Peter and Viv. He asked her if she could help him to create a plan to ruin Peter's reputation. She was about to refuse, but them she told him that she would help him. They started working on it. They told EVERYONE about Peter's biggest secret (which, I can't tell). After that, the kids that were bothering Matt stopped, and started picking on Peter.

         Peter was confused, and that's when he realised that it was "Matt's fault". He felt very guilty, since Matt was doing that because he was dissapointed on him. He went to Peter and he apologized. Matt acepted his apologize and told him that he doesn't mind at all, and they became friends again.